Akushi's right about the hips. Take into account the head to hip ratio and the characters look a bit like SD's ( [link] ) If you work at anatomy, then your all set! The toning and the story itself is all GREAT!
..... OMG! I LOVE HIS FACIAL EXPRESSION IN THE LAST PANEL!!! *squeeee!*
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lol crotch shot. the anatomy looks improved on this page. especially the top half. from the waist down it's still kinda weird proportions. personally i think it would have been funier if he started swearing with his friend on the phone. my boss was on msn talking with his friend one day and there was lots of ef words and he was like peace out at the end. and i laughed at him.
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Ok sorry I haven't been commenting... I was exploring the wonderful world of dating and failing miserably. Thus, I logged on tonight to catch up on some boy love... (Man my shrink would have a field day with that statement)...
Your pacing has always been strong and this page is no exception. I did giggle at the crotch shot, not sure why I did, I just did.... Love the Zip a tone but miss the bag milk. All in all good job. Now if only one of Alex's friends is St. Nick, I think your comic could be legendary!!!! Sorry. I just miss that ole' red faced, big bellied, satchel packing, reindeer ridin son of a mother less goat. Eh, what are you going to do
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..... OMG! I LOVE HIS FACIAL EXPRESSION IN THE LAST PANEL!!! *squeeee!*
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conserve air - breathe less (spaceballs, a sign in the background)
There is no justice like internet noodle god justice!
Your pacing has always been strong and this page is no exception. I did giggle at the crotch shot, not sure why I did, I just did.... Love the Zip a tone but miss the bag milk. All in all good job. Now if only one of Alex's friends is St. Nick, I think your comic could be legendary!!!! Sorry. I just miss that ole' red faced, big bellied, satchel packing, reindeer ridin son of a mother less goat. Eh, what are you going to do
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